6 Storytelling Techniques To Write Better Business Content

KeystoryContent writers who use a variety of storytelling techniques free themselves from business writing practices frozen in predictability. The result is lively content that gets noticed, nudges action, and nullifies any thought of your company being boring.

Focus

When writers can describe their content piece in three words they have achieved focus. These words usually come in the form of noun, verb and object. Take a cue from Hollywood screenwriters: boy meets girl or David versus Goliath. These words also insinuate what the protagonist (company or client) wants.

Set up a choice

Who is the decision maker and what choice will he or she be making? Introduce some conflict or tension. Identify an unexpected consequence and fill in the details. For example: John Smith began searching for more backhoes after realizing he underestimated the scale of a long-term construction project. A question kept racing through his mind – Should I rent or buy? After visiting ABC dealership he got the answer he needed, both – through a rent to buy agreement.

Build character

Products can be people too through personification. Establish character traits. Not just physical appearance, benefits or features, but something they/it hates. Speech patterns, sounds, smells, and textures will make your customer, employee or product unique to the reader.

Point of View

When you want to get personal, use “I”. It can be very powerful. A lot of customer-focused content emphasizes “you” putting the reader in the setting so they can see the possibilities. The know it all, omniscient point of view puts the reader at a distance but is good for overview or summary types of content.

Use Dialogue

Capture the real words your audience uses. On a page or screen, the eye is drawn to quotation marks. Use them. Speaking about writing tight for video, Al Tompkins says: “Tell only what the viewer can’t see. The words and pictures shouldn’t match. When writing for the ear use the most powerful phrase at the end of each dialogue.” Good information succinctly expressed.

Resolve the Conflict

When writing business content the best way to resolve conflict may be stating a clear-cut outcome. Most business people don’t want the conclusion to be left to interpretation. Offering a parallel to the beginning of a piece is a favorite technique of mine. It brings the reader full circle.

Using storytelling techniques writers can move away from the predictable towards the lively and unexpected. The world becomes a better place. Would you be more likely to read a David versus Goliath story, What David Lost or Goliath Wins! ?

 

What Do Content and Robust Seniors Have in Common?

Robust seniorWhen robust seniors were asked to share their top ten tips for productive aging I immediately saw a correlation between their advice and how good content supports the health of a business.

Is your company aging well? Use this shared wisdom from seniors to revitalize your business content.

1. Simplify. Identify priorities and trim the superfluous.

Companies often have only seconds to capture the attention of potential customers. Content that articulates in a simple form offers clarity. The most important content is positioned first and the least, last.

2. Pay attention to yourself.

True differentiation in the market place comes from knowing who you are as a company. Staying true to the vision and its expression creates authentic content, attracting the kind of customers you want.

3. Continue to teach and learn.

Lessons learned is a great topic for content. It shows that a company has humility and continues to learn. Sharing a lesson makes a company generous and likable in the eyes of its audience.

4. Be flexible: learn to navigate change.

This is a key message in Eric Ries’ book The Lean Startup (which shares insights for any size business at any age). Knowing when to pivot and redirect is vital to keeping a company strong and its content fresh.

5. Be charitable: make it a practice to give.

By giving valuable content companies receive more than an email address, an online reaction, or purchase.  They become trustworthy and authoritative.

6. Be financially astute.

If you are spending more money with little return, it is a sign your company is not aging well. Added features should command higher prices, but only when they are positioned as problem solvers for your customer.

7. Participate in activities that interest you.

Any action is a source for content. Show your industry involvement, your achievements, your subject matter expertise through blogs and forums of interest.

8. Commit to good nutrition and exercise.

Publish new ideas that feed the growth of your business in an internal newsletter and routinely experiment with executing some of them on a scale that makes sense.

9. Think about your past and future, deal with your mortality.

Business longevity, experience, and familiarity make it comfortable for customers to work with you. Surprise keeps them interested.

10. Be involved, be positive, link with others.

The social web invites you to connect in ways never before possible. Positive content is shared more often than negative. Spread your news and that of your customers with goodwill.

Which tip is your favorite?

How to Personalize Your Business Content

Business is personal. Business content often is not. Because it’s people who buy and sell products and services it’s time to personalize the message. Companies are unique, just like the faces behind the desks and the voices on the phone are.  You may need to dig below the surface to reveal what’s authentic. What is some times allusive for companies may be just what customers respond to most.

Be Emotional

At the FritoLay corporate website visitors engage quickly with the company’s “Happiness Exhibit”. Through trivia questions they invite the viewer to learn more.

Happiness Project

Menu options include “Your Health” and “Our Planet”. Both are topics that stir an emotional response.

Stay friendly, but not overly friendly

Think of the difference between these two lines that could be the ending of an email message:

Enjoy your day.

Enjoy the day!

The first line is a cliché’ with no impact. In the second line, the subtleness of “the” averts being too friendly or restrictive in your intended wish. The exclamation point adds emphasis (though this punctuation mark should be used judiciously).

Exhibit Generosity and Stay Ahead of the Curve

At the SupplySide West trade show held in October exhibitors from NP Nutra, a supplier of botanical ingredients and extracts, handed out 2012 calendars. It’s an example of simple, generous foresight. On each page is a beautiful nature photograph taken from around the world and a write up on one of their products including its origin and uses.

Use “We” and “You”

Using the personal pronouns “we” and “you” gives a feeling of someone talking to me, not an audience of Wall Street bankers.

Simplify

Busy people get refreshed seeing simple language that offers them a benefit. From the website of the machine repair Celestino Rodriguez Consulting Corp.

If we can’t fix it, it’s broke.
We are here to fix your machine.
We can also make it work better than before.  Ask.

The iron stays good forever.  Increase your effectiveness
with a retrofitted machine.  All new guts and none of the hassles.

Being friendly, generous, authentic and straightforward are great ways to personalize your business content. Connecting with customers becomes easier and easier.

Enjoy the day!