Here is this week’s worst sentence found on the web and a revision.

BEFORE
“Now, it is also important when you read that answer that you realize that if you have an Upsell process and/or a “BACK END” or call center, you MUST take into considersation [sic] the effects your FRONT END offer and conversions play on your BACK END to see the NET RESULT of your campaign.”

AFTER
To see the net result of your campaign, measure the effects your front end offer and conversions have on your back end.

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